Writing

Wordsmiths I am scared of

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Wordsmiths. Great story telling & marketing.

10% of content- Main story: view of ha long bay from an airplane in 15 mins

90%- Extra flesh: view from hanoi to halong, beautiful ha long, experienced reliable pilots, history of aviation. The history is added because the scenery is not brilliant enough so yeah, time to use your imagination (down there are bomb craters you cannot see, many of which disappeared).

Ended with the tour’s slogan.

This is something to learn from when your subject lacks substance wink emoticon

But hey, 6 million for 15 mins even not being able to feel the water? Why not just climb to one out of numerous mountain tops there and spend the rest for a private junk in a secluded part in the bay?

When bird’s eye view is overrated.

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